Itching

Dr. Landry is writing a chapter for an allergy book and he's asked both Erin and me to read his semi-finished document. He explicitly told me he wants critical comments on it, but I wonder how much criticism he actually wants, because after reading it, I feel like it needs some major overhauls. Don't get me wrong, the writing isn't bad, it just feels disorganized. Personally, I would have structured the whole thing differently. But then that's me.

Maybe I'll just go ahead and ask him my questions then make some suggestions. After all, that's why he asked me to read it right?